Since i was fourteen years old, my parents went to Rome sixteen days because they wanted to visit it.
I being alone in the house wiht my grandmother. I had to do the dinner for her and me because of my parents weren´t wiht us.
I tried doing the dinner but all I do get burned so I decided rang chinese restaurant and got food addres. My grandmother didn´t like chinese food consequently I lay her saying was normal food and she ate it.
Finally my parents arrived and I let eat chinese food. If I sincere, now I detest it¡
I being alone in the house wiht my grandmother. I had to do the dinner for her and me because of my parents weren´t wiht us.
I tried doing the dinner but all I do get burned so I decided rang chinese restaurant and got food addres. My grandmother didn´t like chinese food consequently I lay her saying was normal food and she ate it.
Finally my parents arrived and I let eat chinese food. If I sincere, now I detest it¡
(Since) WHEN I was fourteen years old, my parents went to Rome FOR sixteen days because they wanted to visit it.
ResponderEliminarI (being) WAS alone in the house (wiht) WITH my grandmother. I had to (do the) MAKE dinner for her and (me) I because (of) my parents weren´t (wiht) WITH us.
I tried (doing the) MAKING dinner but (all)EVERYTHING I (do) MADE gOt burned so I decided TO rIng A Chinese restaurant and gEt (food addres) TAKE AWAY. My grandmother (didn´t) DOESN'T like Chinese food consequently* I LIED TO her (saying) AND SAID IT was normal food and she ate it.
Finally my parents arrived and I (let) STOPPED eatING Chinese food. If I (sincere) AM HONEST, now I detest it!
* "CONSEQUENTLY" IS A BIT FORMAL FOR THIS STORY. "SO" IS MORE APPROPRIATE STYLISTICALLY.
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